Deliverable_1.md

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ Sam is a 68-year-old small business resource manager who is in charge of allocat
 
 **Epic(s)**
 
-"**As** Sam, **I want to** modernize my resource operations, **so that** I can become more efficient in my tasks."
+"**As** Sam, **I want to** modernize my resource company’s inventory on a digital platform operations, **so that** I can boost productivity by negating the need to record organize numerous items on multiple sheets of paper."
 
 **User stories –**
 
-1)     **As** Sam\*\*, I want to\*\* have the ability to add, modify and delete items from projects I oversee, **so that** one can easily allocate and manage tools and equipment within the company.
+1)     **As** Sam\*\*, I want to\*\* have the ability to add, modify and delete items from projects via an inventory table, **so that** one can easily allocate tools and equipment within the company with a single click.
 
-2)     **As** Sam\*\*, I want to be\*\* able to export and/or import a specified list of equipment to/from a spread sheet, **so that** efficiently track and compare our past and current inventory.
+2)     **As** Sam\*\*, I want to be\*\* able to export and/or import a specified list of equipment to/from a spread sheet, **so that** large amounts of data can be efficiently analyzed and compared with our past and current inventory.
 
 **Acceptance tests –**
 
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ Persona 3: Retail Supervisor - Dann
 
 #### Current Deliverable
 
-Emmanuel Amanie: Create Persona, Epic, User Stories, Acceptance Test and Story Points for Sam. Contribution \_% 
+Emmanuel Amanie: Create Persona, Epic, User Stories, Acceptance Test and Story Points for Sam. Contribution \_%
 
 Leo Liu: